Saturday, March 28, 2009

Few words for a writer friend

 A shade of violet, modest and humble,
Terse in speech, polished in style;
A rare specimen of delicious wine,
From choicest fruits with perfect taste;
So rare a being shines behind the words,
Graceful, intoxicating, beckoning for more
Words that mirror unspoken thoughts,
Known realms and a kinship of wavelength. 


2 comments:

swapnap said...

Beautiful, its so neat and elegant. The colour is my favorite.Thanks for posting it.

kalyani vallath said...

Lovely writing. However the confessional tone sometimes gets tedious. I would suggest you try other themes and styles as well. Your writing should carry the power of ideas, of a philosophy of life. Now it is too much of the heart. And edit your work, dear. I feel some words and expressions can be fine-tuned and replaced with better ones. When you read, internalize the manifold ways in which language breaks into song. With more care, you will be impeccable!